Posted 02 October 2005 - 05:06 PM
Miss Lee — Interesting approach! The truth going on a world tour. Wouldn't THAT change everything!
Stojan.Kosic — Interesting! Message is very clear; a dividing up of personality; that there are many sides to a person. Truth brings these parts together and makes them whole again. Nice!
Spartan — Wow! Very funky! Truth can sometimes be 'hard to swallow.' Nice!
Fontana — An interesting appraoch! This says a lot. You've captured a dream-like quality very well. The mask symbolic of the ego. Nice!
dbantner — Looks much better. Message is clearer. Nice!
XPU100 — Very poetic! A contemplation of reality. Beautiful type treatment, colors, and compostion. Nice job!
Rougefemme — Nice! 1st one is trippy. She has eyes like that of one who knows. I like the humor in the second one. Something you'd read in a Carlos Castaneda book! You may want to change the type in the second one to read 'truth.' Right now it looks like it says 'truh?' Great compostion and type treatment! Nice!
B1987 — I like your color palette. Compostion could use a little more work. The figure on the right is competing with the type for attention. You may want to try balancing the way the lights and darks fall on the page a bit more. Nice job!
Ram035 — Thanks for you effective help with posting links!
Stojan.Kosic — 2nd one is indeed interesting! Really nice photo! Good type treatment. Nice compostion in both. Nice!
Mihai1984 — Interesting! Futuristic feeling. Balanced compostion, good color palette, and good type use. If there was a movie coming out about it, this would be cool to use! Nice job!
Ram035 — Very creative! The bottom feels a little seperate. Maybe a little more cohesion. Perhaps adding some color to the bottom part, bringing 'is in you' to the bottom will help. Suggestive of an alternate reality. Nice job!
EXCELLENT WORK DESIGNERS!
Let's keep going!
Peace
Intuit
Don't look outside of yourself for the truth, for the truth is in you.