I don't know, but I felt blueish & greenish somehow.. I'll do some new ones tomorrow, that's it for today, the night is waiting for me out there...
Spring Postcard Contest
First participation, feels great..I don't know, but I felt blueish & greenish somehow.. I'll...
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Posted 10 March 2008 - 03:33 AM
Bugsjr:
Nice!
I like the punchy colours and some good ornamental graphics in there.
I think the green background is cool...very springtime...but the clouds motif is a bit busy and doesn't compliment your central illustration very well.
Maybe just try a sold green background?
Also: probably a lot of work, but it would be awesome to see the text integrated into the bottom of the illustration (made out of or weaved into the roots, perhaps?)
Anyhow. Well done.
Nice!
I like the punchy colours and some good ornamental graphics in there.
I think the green background is cool...very springtime...but the clouds motif is a bit busy and doesn't compliment your central illustration very well.
Maybe just try a sold green background?
Also: probably a lot of work, but it would be awesome to see the text integrated into the bottom of the illustration (made out of or weaved into the roots, perhaps?)
Anyhow. Well done.
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bugsjr
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Posted 11 March 2008 - 09:17 AM
Bugsjr:
Nice!
I like the punchy colours and some good ornamental graphics in there.
I think the green background is cool...very springtime...but the clouds motif is a bit busy and doesn't compliment your central illustration very well.
Maybe just try a sold green background?
Also: probably a lot of work, but it would be awesome to see the text integrated into the bottom of the illustration (made out of or weaved into the roots, perhaps?)
Anyhow. Well done.
Thanks for the feedback!
If i have time i will give a try to modify the postcard!(Hope i have time)
Anyhow thanks for the feedback
#29
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Posted 11 March 2008 - 08:17 PM
here are my attempts with slight variations. let me know what you think.
http://dccontest-dez...r.blogspot.com/
http://dccontest-dez...r.blogspot.com/
#31
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Posted 14 March 2008 - 07:14 PM
Everyone...
I apologize for my absence/lack of feedback...I'm just now recovering from being super sick.....I see alot of terrific entries, keep them coming (Tomorrow is last day)
I apologize for my absence/lack of feedback...I'm just now recovering from being super sick.....I see alot of terrific entries, keep them coming (Tomorrow is last day)
#32
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Posted 15 March 2008 - 04:24 AM
made a couple of changes to my original ideas. would love some feedback.
http://dccontest-dez...r.blogspot.com/
http://dccontest-dez...r.blogspot.com/
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Posted 15 March 2008 - 06:31 AM
Spring........canvas of nature. this is my first entry. tell me what do you think.
Visit my temporary portfolio:
http://shajib.carbonmade.com
http://shajib.carbonmade.com
#35
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Posted 16 March 2008 - 01:45 AM
@jasndavis- I really like yours. It is a sophiscated design in my opinion. I think maybe you should try it with a bit of a lighter green, something a little more fresh and new.
@shajib_gm- awesome concept, love the colors. I feel really drawn to it.
@shajib_gm- awesome concept, love the colors. I feel really drawn to it.
#36
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Posted 16 March 2008 - 02:08 AM
@Emir- I like this, it reminds me of a rothko piece.
@aslan- I like the bird postcard better than this one, it was very endearing while this one seems a bit plain.
@Cmd+X- Love what you've done with the word spring.
@baiskee - I like the type, and the image, but not so much the scratch right over the flower. I think you should try expanding it to make a border shape.
@ Binary- I like the tree and the rays of light, but not the circles or the color. The colors are beautiful but they remind of more of fall and the full circles make that corner feel a bit heavy
@aslan- I like the bird postcard better than this one, it was very endearing while this one seems a bit plain.
@Cmd+X- Love what you've done with the word spring.
@baiskee - I like the type, and the image, but not so much the scratch right over the flower. I think you should try expanding it to make a border shape.
@ Binary- I like the tree and the rays of light, but not the circles or the color. The colors are beautiful but they remind of more of fall and the full circles make that corner feel a bit heavy
#37
darb
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Posted 16 March 2008 - 02:25 AM
Here is my entry, The photo is mine and I can provide original if need be, I did alot of editing to the photo.
Ive just moved from canada to australia so I went from winter to summer in a few hours and now its fall here lol.
hope I made the cut off,
Cheers
Ive just moved from canada to australia so I went from winter to summer in a few hours and now its fall here lol.
hope I made the cut off,
Cheers
#39
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Posted 16 March 2008 - 04:14 PM
Thanks ~V~.
btw, its not a scratch... its a paintbrush stroke to give focus on the flower and the watermark effect for the bee.
jasndavis, i like your design...font is too heavy for me though but overall design is good.
btw, its not a scratch... its a paintbrush stroke to give focus on the flower and the watermark effect for the bee.
jasndavis, i like your design...font is too heavy for me though but overall design is good.
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