number1:
CLICK HERE
number2:
CLICK HERE
can you plz give me comments about how 2 improve the sites.
Which Is Better?
number1:CLICK HEREnumber2:CLICK HEREcan you plz give me comments about how 2 improve the sites.
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#6
DigitalDoodler
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Posted 02 July 2003 - 10:31 PM
i think uve got a good start, as far as where u want everything placed, but i do have a few suggestions to improve them..
1. select fonts that go with the design... u seem to like the whole right angle design, which is ok, but then stick with fonts that are mostly right angles, not the font u used for the header.. also, for filler text, use a font that u can actually use in a website's text, like arial, verdana, times, etc.
2. spice up the site! add some stock photos perhaps behind where it says Design-Contest.. or make the site more 3d using gradients and whatnot..
3. dont rely on just boxes and lines... try adding some rounded corners, 45 degree angles, etc.. it adds a lot to the site..
4. eliminate the black borders where two boxes meet.. take, for instance, the top left corner where the two purple boxes meet.. i think it would look better if u deleted that black line where the meet, so that it looks like two connect boxes, rather than two next to eachother..
i see that u are learning, and with a few more tutorials and whatnot, u should be better in no time! good luck with this layout!
1. select fonts that go with the design... u seem to like the whole right angle design, which is ok, but then stick with fonts that are mostly right angles, not the font u used for the header.. also, for filler text, use a font that u can actually use in a website's text, like arial, verdana, times, etc.
2. spice up the site! add some stock photos perhaps behind where it says Design-Contest.. or make the site more 3d using gradients and whatnot..
3. dont rely on just boxes and lines... try adding some rounded corners, 45 degree angles, etc.. it adds a lot to the site..
4. eliminate the black borders where two boxes meet.. take, for instance, the top left corner where the two purple boxes meet.. i think it would look better if u deleted that black line where the meet, so that it looks like two connect boxes, rather than two next to eachother..
i see that u are learning, and with a few more tutorials and whatnot, u should be better in no time! good luck with this layout!
#10
Guest_Fred2D_*
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Posted 16 July 2003 - 11:11 PM
I hardly recommend you too remove that Bevel and Emboss.
Otherwise #1 is best.
Otherwise #1 is best.
#12
Alkaiser 17
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Posted 19 July 2003 - 04:32 PM
Out of those two, I'd say one. I think you need to change the color from purple to a deep blue or light blue; either one goes good with gray. Just keep on working on the site and the colors should hopefully come to you.
Looking for a Flash/Graphics Designer with a lot of expierience? PM me and we'll talk!
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