I dig it. But agree with the comment about distinct motion blur and the gray background seems a bit too morose.
Magazine Cover
I dig it. But agree with the comment about distinct motion blur and the gray background seems a bit too morose.
&nsbp;
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trisler
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Posted 02 July 2010 - 11:02 PM
Hey I'm back with yet another cover for a magazine. Because of the success and creativity of my Dad's biking cover, my Mom suggested I do one for my cousin who is getting married soon. Granted, I wasn't quite sure if this would be appropriate for the occasion, I had a lot of support behind it so here's what I came up with. I wanted to try and keep it simple and not overbearing like many tabloids are with their crazy headlines and the like. Tell me what you think! Thanks again!
http://dl.dropbox.co...g Blue mag1.jpg
PS: Sorry the image is so big but it works well if you save it first then open it up in your own image preview.
maybe more intense of a shadow on "EXCLUSIVE FIRST LOOK at Aimee & Scott". But, yeah, it's very classy and not tabloid-ey.
btw, I think this is a great idea. My friends just got married and I just got them a doormat. Now I know better.
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Pieterjanarends
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Posted 03 July 2010 - 05:20 PM
Nice start. Some suggestions: The placement of the type feels kind of random. Maybe you should align alle the type to the left. Also theres not alot of space between the type and the edge of the cover. Good luck and keep up the good work.
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darthsheep
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Posted 24 September 2010 - 02:26 PM
Extremely good cover. Just some details i think you could cover, small stuff (sorry for being that much of a picky dude):
the margins on the left and right titles could be the same. And you could align the top of the second title (TOUR DE FRANCE) with the base of the first one (MARK BENNET).
the margins on the left and right titles could be the same. And you could align the top of the second title (TOUR DE FRANCE) with the base of the first one (MARK BENNET).
Edited by darthsheep, 24 September 2010 - 02:28 PM.
#36
barrywh
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Posted 27 September 2010 - 10:22 AM
I love the "Something Blue" cover. Very nice choice of color palette. My only perspective is I think the "Exclusive First Look" lines get a bit lost while overlapping the photo and frame. And maybe make Aimee and Scott's names a little bigger and more noticeable (from my experience, people LOVE to see their names in print!)... Drop the "Best Wedding Locations" liners down just a tad to add more white space effect under the flowers... and you're good to go!
Great work!
Great work!
:)Barry
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