I'm working on cd packaging layout/design for a folk/americana band. Here's the progression so far:
work in progress - album art
hey guys - I like to see other artists' processes, so I'm sure others like to as well. I'm...
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Posted 16 July 2010 - 03:34 AM
I really like the second one (:
yeah - I kinda liked the color study for it, too. I'm kinda pressed for time on it and am wishing I would have went with a less detail-intensive style.
Here's where I am now - I need to finish up the head/hands on the lower right, add some more depth to the background and then run over the type again. Then I'll probably tweak it (blurs for more depth, adjust some color in photoshop and maybe add some texture to the smooth areas) and it'll be done. Hopefully I can do all that tonight still!
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Posted 16 July 2010 - 04:43 AM
I think you captured the americana colors very well. It looks pretty cool without the added texture, americana art doesn't have a whole lot of texture other than the crackle in some artwork. The texture you have already is pretty close to what I have seen in many americana paintings.
The added red in the fire or is that part of the dress? Any way the red there kinda distracts from the fire a little.
I think it is great and hope the artist likes it as well, this looks like quite a bit of work, hope you were paid well!
The added red in the fire or is that part of the dress? Any way the red there kinda distracts from the fire a little.
I think it is great and hope the artist likes it as well, this looks like quite a bit of work, hope you were paid well!
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Posted 16 July 2010 - 04:56 AM
well - the red is supposed to be a scarf that will be repeated on the right side...but maybe it isn't that clear...hmmm...I'll have to think about that one.
yeah - for the texture, I was planning some black crackle texture...I was also thinking of going over some points where the detail is a little foggy with a 1pt black brush set to overprint...depends. The left side feels like it needs a little more dimension as I'm finishing up the right side.
payment...haha...I've actually been doing work for free or super cheap for this particular band for a couple years now. They helped me build up a decent poster portfolio to get into some pretty good jobs.
They're kind of my "pro bono" / "pet" client. They aren't signed, so their money really is kinda tight - this is their second self-produced album, but the first time really working with a proper studio/production manager. I just want them to have the best chance possible...I guess I have a soft spot in my heart (or maybe my head - lol) for bands
thanks for the critique - I'll post some more in a while.
yeah - for the texture, I was planning some black crackle texture...I was also thinking of going over some points where the detail is a little foggy with a 1pt black brush set to overprint...depends. The left side feels like it needs a little more dimension as I'm finishing up the right side.
payment...haha...I've actually been doing work for free or super cheap for this particular band for a couple years now. They helped me build up a decent poster portfolio to get into some pretty good jobs.
They're kind of my "pro bono" / "pet" client. They aren't signed, so their money really is kinda tight - this is their second self-produced album, but the first time really working with a proper studio/production manager. I just want them to have the best chance possible...I guess I have a soft spot in my heart (or maybe my head - lol) for bands
thanks for the critique - I'll post some more in a while.
I think you captured the americana colors very well. It looks pretty cool without the added texture, americana art doesn't have a whole lot of texture other than the crackle in some artwork. The texture you have already is pretty close to what I have seen in many americana paintings.
The added red in the fire or is that part of the dress? Any way the red there kinda distracts from the fire a little.
I think it is great and hope the artist likes it as well, this looks like quite a bit of work, hope you were paid well!
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Posted 16 July 2010 - 05:21 AM
I didn't see it as a scarf, I can see it now but it seems to cover the fire to much maybe. Again I think you captured the americana art feel well
Hey you never know they might be the next zack brown band!
I made it opaque - I think that helps. It definitely helped me on the right side when I had to render it much larger!
Thanks for the compliment...but now I'm worried that I lost that americana aesthetic on the right side!
I do think I'm improving on my "painterly" technique in Illustrator, though - this is a lot different from my normal style in AI.
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Posted 16 July 2010 - 07:42 AM
I couldn't come up with a good crackle that I liked, so I might try just a wear pattern...I thought this had a good wood board feel to it.
After not looking at it for a little while and looking at it now - I need to rework the hands.
After not looking at it for a little while and looking at it now - I need to rework the hands.
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Posted 20 July 2010 - 05:02 PM
I really like how bright the moon is on the trees. I'm sad to see the script go from "Clifton Roy & Folkstringer" even though I suppose it was hard to read.
The white shading on "LOVE & WHISKEY" might be too bright.
Otherwise, this is really pretty and they're lucky to be your "pet" client.
The white shading on "LOVE & WHISKEY" might be too bright.
Otherwise, this is really pretty and they're lucky to be your "pet" client.
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Posted 20 July 2010 - 05:15 PM
Agree about the script, the font you are using now doesn't have that americana folk art feel or look, i think the white is ok on love and whiskey, this type of outlining is used a lot in folk art. Yep that hand kinda looks like he borrowed it from the incredible hulk LOL I hate hands, I think hands are the hardest for me to do. This is where the saying it will cost you an arm and a leg, in the old days and maybe still today...artist would go to specific artists just to do arms and legs, hands and feet with set prices, so it ended up costing an arm or leg more. But I am guessing everyone already knew that and I am now just blabbering
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Posted 20 July 2010 - 05:55 PM
here's the front/back cover. I reworked the hand a little bit - I'm happy with it now. It's still not 100% anatomically accurate, but when I redrew the hands to actually be 100% accurate (I took some photos of my hands) it kinda killed some of the whimsy/charm of the image. So I changed them a little, but not that much. They wanted a time piece on the back - so I vectored in one of those, too - and then handlettered the song titles.
I'm trying to keep everything 100% vector because I plan on using it for their album tour poster - and it will scale well now.
I also rendered a 30s-style paper cocktail napkin with some whiskey stains, lipstick kisses and a phone number that bleeds out for the insert. The inside will be just a woodgrain/bar tabletop with some various things carved into/spilled onto it. The disc will then look like an old paper beer coaster.
Everything is due to press by Thursday, so I've been rushing to get it all done!!
I'm trying to keep everything 100% vector because I plan on using it for their album tour poster - and it will scale well now.
I also rendered a 30s-style paper cocktail napkin with some whiskey stains, lipstick kisses and a phone number that bleeds out for the insert. The inside will be just a woodgrain/bar tabletop with some various things carved into/spilled onto it. The disc will then look like an old paper beer coaster.
Everything is due to press by Thursday, so I've been rushing to get it all done!!
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