my second try, this time it's much less overpowering and full vectoral
here is how it looks with a content
PS: The car is not my design, I took it from openclipart which allow me to use it here, I hope it's not a problem for this particular contest
2•25•07 Canvas Contest
ENTRY#10my second try, this time it's much less overpowering and full vectoralhere is how it looks...
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tapir
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Posted 03 March 2007 - 03:15 AM
ENTRY#10
my second try, this time it's much less overpowering and full vectoral
here is how it looks with a content
PS: The car is not my design, I took it from openclipart which allow me to use it here, I hope it's not a problem for this particular contest
my second try, this time it's much less overpowering and full vectoral
here is how it looks with a content
PS: The car is not my design, I took it from openclipart which allow me to use it here, I hope it's not a problem for this particular contest
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rinaldidesigns
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 05:58 PM
Here is feedback...wow, I really impressed with what everyone has come up with:D
adambender post #6
Very unique, I think the dimension/type on path, may to distracting from the design, I do like the font simplicity you've chosen....
morethanjustok post #7
very nice...I like the box angles, almost like swatches fanned out, and the layout of the text...I think more contrast between the white, and light grey would great;)
samisad0rk post #8
nice revision....it looks more WOW, here I am, cleaner:)
designer3d712 post #9
love the positioning of the pantone chips:) The text flatcolor, greyscale, b& w, get lost where they are now, maybe incorporate into the box some how?
tapir post #10
very nice! Love how it all flows. the module look works GREAT! It really feels polished.
STAY TUNED...MORE FEEDBACK TO COME....
adambender post #6
Very unique, I think the dimension/type on path, may to distracting from the design, I do like the font simplicity you've chosen....
morethanjustok post #7
very nice...I like the box angles, almost like swatches fanned out, and the layout of the text...I think more contrast between the white, and light grey would great;)
samisad0rk post #8
nice revision....it looks more WOW, here I am, cleaner:)
designer3d712 post #9
love the positioning of the pantone chips:) The text flatcolor, greyscale, b& w, get lost where they are now, maybe incorporate into the box some how?
tapir post #10
very nice! Love how it all flows. the module look works GREAT! It really feels polished.
STAY TUNED...MORE FEEDBACK TO COME....
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designer3d712
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Posted 04 March 2007 - 10:13 PM
designer3d712 post #9
love the positioning of the pantone chips:) The text flatcolor, greyscale, b& w, get lost where they are now, maybe incorporate into the box some how?
Thank you for the feedback. I incorporated the text into the boxes in post #19 version 1.1
below is a new concept, version 2.
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designer3d712
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Posted 05 March 2007 - 02:29 PM
If this implies to mine, then I really appreciate your comment. Yours also Is a nice conceptI like your's
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rinaldidesigns
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Posted 05 March 2007 - 03:33 PM
asango post #11
I like the minimalism, and agree that the designers work would be well showcased, maybe just a tad more dark, more contrast? I also think the script font (used in design contest) doesn't compliment the minimal/modern design...? Thanks:)
morethanjustok post #15
I really like the different shape, it is appealing...nice to see something different!
adambender post #17
I think this one works better than your first, Maybe try to frame it somehow? It looks like its floating, not pulled together? I really love the font choices:)
designer3d712 post #19
Better:)
aammoore post #20
Like the top, and the pms chips, the bottom color areas(flat, etc) are
distracting, maybe try without the swirl???
tapir post #21
while I like this design, looks better with content, I like your first better...the 2nd seems to light?...the first isn't total vector??...it would be easy to convert to vector;)
I will be back later with more feed back...wow, so many great entries:)
I like the minimalism, and agree that the designers work would be well showcased, maybe just a tad more dark, more contrast? I also think the script font (used in design contest) doesn't compliment the minimal/modern design...? Thanks:)
morethanjustok post #15
I really like the different shape, it is appealing...nice to see something different!
adambender post #17
I think this one works better than your first, Maybe try to frame it somehow? It looks like its floating, not pulled together? I really love the font choices:)
designer3d712 post #19
Better:)
aammoore post #20
Like the top, and the pms chips, the bottom color areas(flat, etc) are
distracting, maybe try without the swirl???
tapir post #21
while I like this design, looks better with content, I like your first better...the 2nd seems to light?...the first isn't total vector??...it would be easy to convert to vector;)
I will be back later with more feed back...wow, so many great entries:)
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designer3d712
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Posted 05 March 2007 - 03:52 PM
designer3d712 post #19
Better:)
tapir post #21
the first isn't total vector??...it would be easy to convert to vector;)
These need to be Vector? My apologies for submitting if it are. Not having Illustrator yet, I use Photoshop to create my images.
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asango
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Posted 05 March 2007 - 03:54 PM
thanks for the feedback rinaldidesigns, i agree about the font comment, check my v1.1 (#27) for a better version. i get what you're saying about the contrast, i was trying to find a balance. i'll upload another version with a bit more contrast tonight.
thx.
thx.
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