Hey design comunity... I started to little work on my new personal logo. here is the first idea or rough concept. Give me please some feedback and critique.
Thanx
Mike
personal logo
Hey design comunity... I started to little work on my new personal logo. here is the first idea or rough...
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entz
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Posted 14 January 2008 - 06:04 AM
I like the idea for the H... but not the name in vertical. It seems out of place to me. Maybe just flip the H to the other side and use the M as the other vertical bar for the H. The name just seems out of place to me. Hope that helps.
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_Redrum
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Posted 14 January 2008 - 07:37 AM
I agree with entz. If you want to have something vertical, the 24 would be a good candidate. It would require some other changes though.
Also, I'm kind of bugged by the missing lower right corner. If there were only two corners, then I think it would be fine, but putting 3 of them in and leaving out the last one makes it seem a bit off.
One last thing: I would put a bit more padding into the place where "designs" is written. It looks too tightly cramped in that box.
Also, I'm kind of bugged by the missing lower right corner. If there were only two corners, then I think it would be fine, but putting 3 of them in and leaving out the last one makes it seem a bit off.
One last thing: I would put a bit more padding into the place where "designs" is written. It looks too tightly cramped in that box.
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Posted 14 January 2008 - 05:30 PM
Looks very techy. I would get rid of the box corners altogether and try to figure out something else for the vertical bar of the "H" I don't really like the name flipped. I also think the fonts are to heavy for the "MH24" part.
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Chung Dha
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Posted 02 August 2008 - 09:51 AM
would not make the H like that. Cause it look more like Mt|24 then MH24.
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geek
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Posted 07 August 2008 - 03:20 PM
Too complex and generic for me too. I always see similar style for starting designers. Why not do some kerning on the letters until it becomes a unique font. Try to be simple and make the message clear. Consider you are trying to design a logo for another designer or creative agency, not for yourself. - Just my suggestion.
It's common for us to use our emotions or feelings than create a solution that will communicate well to the audience. A designer provides solutions while an artist create a masterpiece based on what he likes and what he feels, also to express himself. So take away those fancy feel, go straight to the point. Ask yourself first if you want to be recognized as an artist or a designer
It's common for us to use our emotions or feelings than create a solution that will communicate well to the audience. A designer provides solutions while an artist create a masterpiece based on what he likes and what he feels, also to express himself. So take away those fancy feel, go straight to the point. Ask yourself first if you want to be recognized as an artist or a designer
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Violet
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Posted 08 August 2008 - 04:47 PM
I have an idea for your logo. Since you're using your initials, why not display them like an artist's signature. Here's a little something I came up with to illustrate that idea.
Edited by Violet, 08 August 2008 - 04:51 PM.
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fragonard
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Posted 12 August 2008 - 05:19 PM
Hey design comunity... I started to little work on my new personal logo. here is the first idea or rough concept. Give me please some feedback and critique.
Thanx
Mike
It's ok if you are looking for a solid techno-look. Maybe more compact though.
The name on the vertical is hard to read.
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WickedMind
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Posted 13 September 2008 - 08:34 AM
Last logo with MH24 is looking fine, 'designs' and 'mike haviar' is too much.
A logo should not always mean that you do need to write your companies name.
Take the 'nike' logo. It's recognisable enough without "nike" (although often included).
I would atleast suggest not to use MH and Mike Haviar, drop the last one. and stick with MH24 (and perhaps 'design').
A logo should not always mean that you do need to write your companies name.
Take the 'nike' logo. It's recognisable enough without "nike" (although often included).
I would atleast suggest not to use MH and Mike Haviar, drop the last one. and stick with MH24 (and perhaps 'design').
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sol
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Posted 13 September 2008 - 08:36 AM
First one is good, but i would consider making both sides of the H one size then the logo will get some balance..and too many boxes ...maybe some other font for "designs" since it stands out more then the actual name..otherwise you're good
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Posted 23 October 2008 - 10:56 PM
Now that I saw, I think that the version of your logo in your avatar is the best so far! Keep that one, including the avatar's square shape!
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