They produce and sell fresh, healthy, homegrown and pesticide-free produce.
they want it to carry the theme of laughter (don't ask me why)
Thoughts? feedback?
Vegas Fruits logo!!!!
The client is a small company located in Las Vegas, Nevada They produce and sell fresh, healthy, homegrown...
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Posted 09 December 2008 - 05:16 PM
The client is a small company located in Las Vegas, Nevada
They produce and sell fresh, healthy, homegrown and pesticide-free produce.
they want it to carry the theme of laughter (don't ask me why)
Thoughts? feedback?
They produce and sell fresh, healthy, homegrown and pesticide-free produce.
they want it to carry the theme of laughter (don't ask me why)
Thoughts? feedback?
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Posted 09 December 2008 - 05:37 PM
what is that yellow thing suppose to be? I can't remember eating anything like that, at least not with those fish scales ={
I also don't see the point in making the apple and the fishy yellow thing laughing their as@# off... =p
The colors and type fonts are really good, I would sugest you just to chance the happy food a little bit
I also don't see the point in making the apple and the fishy yellow thing laughing their as@# off... =p
The colors and type fonts are really good, I would sugest you just to chance the happy food a little bit
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Posted 09 December 2008 - 06:06 PM
I think it is a peanut. I think the text need to be bit rounder or try out ofter fonts.
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Posted 09 December 2008 - 06:54 PM
what is that yellow thing suppose to be? I can't remember eating anything like that, at least not with those fish scales ={
I also don't see the point in making the apple and the fishy yellow thing laughing their as@# off... =p
The colors and type fonts are really good, I would sugest you just to chance the happy food a little bit
thanks for catching that Gerhard!
^^ that's what I was going for with the "fish scales"...lol
I'll try changing the color to a nutty brown
PS- they're laughing bacause fruit don't have to pay taxes
@Chung Dha...I'll give another font a try, thanks!
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Posted 09 December 2008 - 08:37 PM
Nice Piece, nothing seems to bother me at the moment too entirely much.
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Posted 11 December 2008 - 02:27 AM
I knew it was a peanut when I first saw it; changing the color might help others though. 
Nice illustrative style to your design.
I really like the logo but the kerning between the letters in VEGAS seems off to me. I think it's just the font. The spaces before and after the EGA make the letters look disconnected from the V & S. Does that bother anyone else?
Nice illustrative style to your design.I really like the logo but the kerning between the letters in VEGAS seems off to me. I think it's just the font. The spaces before and after the EGA make the letters look disconnected from the V & S. Does that bother anyone else?
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Posted 11 December 2008 - 06:48 PM
why don't you try some other brighter and happier colors instead of the dark purple? It looks serious and dull to me. Hope it helps. Is that yellowish thing a peanut or what?
really? the purple looks rich and bright to me...
thanks KHDZN...I'll se what I can do the fix that
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Posted 13 December 2008 - 02:11 AM
The purple looks rich and bright to me too...
Happy peanut now really looks like a happy peanut! New color helped a lot!
Kerning in "FRUITS & NUTS" looks too tight, it's kinda difficult to read, but maybe it's just me... kerning looks OK on the "Vegas".
And I like the font, just not sure you need those lights and shadows on the "Vegas"...
By the way, nice drawing style
Happy peanut now really looks like a happy peanut! New color helped a lot!
Kerning in "FRUITS & NUTS" looks too tight, it's kinda difficult to read, but maybe it's just me... kerning looks OK on the "Vegas".
And I like the font, just not sure you need those lights and shadows on the "Vegas"...
By the way, nice drawing style
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Posted 15 January 2009 - 09:52 PM
I think the kerning is fine - not too tight at all. I'd actually kern it a little tighter between the R & the U in fruit...there seems to be a gap to me. Have you looked at a softer font - something like Helvetica Round? I'd just be curious to see how it looks.
My only real complaint would be the leaf on the apple. I usually see the leaf more at the base of the stem (coming out of the apple) like this:
My only real complaint would be the leaf on the apple. I usually see the leaf more at the base of the stem (coming out of the apple) like this:
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Posted 20 January 2009 - 02:30 AM
I really like the cartoon fellows! my first impression of this was that the font should reflect the the laughing peanut and apple a little more. perhaps a more cartoon like font? Mind it may be too much you the client may not appreciate his logo looking like something out of a child's book. I also agree that the purple doesn't seem to pop. Overall a strong design though very eye catching and fun.
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Posted 30 September 2009 - 02:16 AM
This is an interesting discussion. thank you for sharing
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Posted 01 October 2009 - 12:19 AM
I think the peanut looks peanut-y enough 
I get the idea since it says "fruits & nuts" in the logo.
I agree that purple seems too dark. I know it's a royal/rich color, but when I think of fresh produce, I think greens and reds.
As far as the font goes, I think the colors and shading are perfect, but I'm not crazy about the serif font. I envision a more fluid, organic-looking font.
All in all, I think it's a great start and I love the expressions of the apple and peanut! Good job!
I get the idea since it says "fruits & nuts" in the logo. I agree that purple seems too dark. I know it's a royal/rich color, but when I think of fresh produce, I think greens and reds.
As far as the font goes, I think the colors and shading are perfect, but I'm not crazy about the serif font. I envision a more fluid, organic-looking font.
All in all, I think it's a great start and I love the expressions of the apple and peanut! Good job!
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