Edited by TheDreamer_EJoy, 06 May 2009 - 03:21 PM.
Total Joy Designs.com Logo once again...
Ok i dont like this yet but something like this....
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Posted 06 May 2009 - 04:49 PM
for some reason none of it looks good to me. The underline thing under total just doesn't fit. the font contrasts give me a headace when I look at it. The descender on the g in design look off.
I'd say start over. It's apparent that you want JOY to stand out more so than the rest of the design. I'd say Draw/sketch out the word joy to something that looks good to you then use a standard ol Arial or Times font that may give you the feel I think you're looking for. After that play w/ some other fonts.
Hope this helps as I'm not trying to be rude or anything of the sorts. just honest.
Edit: I like the filled in version better it helped alot. But still think you should start over with a unique 'JOY'.
I'd say start over. It's apparent that you want JOY to stand out more so than the rest of the design. I'd say Draw/sketch out the word joy to something that looks good to you then use a standard ol Arial or Times font that may give you the feel I think you're looking for. After that play w/ some other fonts.
Hope this helps as I'm not trying to be rude or anything of the sorts. just honest.
Edit: I like the filled in version better it helped alot. But still think you should start over with a unique 'JOY'.
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