Hi all, Feedback please if possible on a company webpage header created for a friend.
Thanks
Feedback on Company Webpage Header
Hi all, Feedback please if possible on a company webpage header created for a friend.
Thanks
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akhockey17
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Posted 08 July 2010 - 01:38 PM
I think it's a fairly decent start. Clean and pretty well executed. Though I do think the "Zeon" logo/type could use some TLC, whether it's by changing the font and making it more pronounced because right now as is, you've left it the same as your links and it doesn't stand out as well as it should. I also question your use of a "Home" link and if that is something that was requested. It also makes sense to me, and maybe it's just my own opinion, to have the logo be the link to the home page. I also don't think it's necessary to have "About Zeon Security" written all the way out as "About" should suffice on it's own just fine. Just my 2 cents! Hope some of it helps!
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LawrieM
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Posted 08 July 2010 - 03:04 PM
I agree with akhockey17's comments about font usage.
…also, what might help is ordering your links differently:
Home
About Zeon Security
Latest Products
Contact Us
This ordering will let the links fit better within the curved space you've created and enable you to give a bit more breathing room to the right-hand side.
…also, what might help is ordering your links differently:
Home
About Zeon Security
Latest Products
Contact Us
This ordering will let the links fit better within the curved space you've created and enable you to give a bit more breathing room to the right-hand side.
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wig1989
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Posted 09 July 2010 - 08:41 AM
Thanks for the replys guys, will take notes onboard. I made up the links to be honest as he isnt that sure what he wants yet, just asked for me to make up an idea and then he can comment on what he thought.
this is the first draft so will post new draft when complete.
Thanks
this is the first draft so will post new draft when complete.
Thanks
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melnichele
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Posted 09 August 2010 - 09:50 PM
i really like the orange part of the design, but the font does need work... maybe even just making it regular vs. italicized. i also think you could remove the gray design with the circles behind the navigation and just leave it solid gray.
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nick000
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Posted 09 August 2010 - 10:22 PM
This design is very ugly.
The italic font, the font color, the glows, the swirls all should be taken out.
The grey background gradient surrounding the circle and other shape looks good. Just change everything else and it will be a good design!
The italic font, the font color, the glows, the swirls all should be taken out.
The grey background gradient surrounding the circle and other shape looks good. Just change everything else and it will be a good design!
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