Hi all, Comments please on the below design. This is something ive been working on for a while getting different ideas and designs together and making my own little portfolio to show what i can do. Please just comment on the design itself. Thanks again.
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Hi all, Comments please on the below design. This is something ive been working on for a while getting...
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darthsheep
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Posted 24 September 2010 - 01:48 PM
hi. nice work, but did you try removing the edges of the trees? they're kinda bothering me. And i think you should try with few circles around the sun, and why not none at all. I just feel like there's too much elements in the sky, thats why i feel it would be a good idea to remove the edges of the trees and the circles around the sun. Btw, its just suggestions.
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ipsum
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Posted 06 October 2010 - 11:20 AM
I really like all the textures. The five bars are like Winter's fingers. Putting them at an angle might look good too. I like the sun, but lose the circle pattern motif in the background and your design will look more original and stylistically cohesive. The bleak tree tops make it easy to recognize the tree is duplicated, which is sort of amusing. Rework the headline so it is not so Yoda. Leave out the "Act on what you believe". Crop the page to poster size. Add some leaping salmon at the bottom, or replace the birds with flying fish to work with the headline.
Edited by ipsum, 06 October 2010 - 11:24 AM.
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RC123
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Posted 24 November 2010 - 03:37 AM
I completely agree with Ipsum. On first glance I do like this poster, but feel like it's unbalanced with all the chaos on top vs the white w/ text on bottom. Maybe make the white a VERY muted yellow picked up from the top portion? I think the circle design could work in the sky, but only if you lose some of the rings around the sun (or at least tone them down in opacity).
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ashskye
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Posted 11 December 2010 - 08:33 PM
I think the color contrast between the warm and cool colors works well. I agree about simplifying the sky and reworking the headline a bit. The "act on what you believe" line seems to close to the bottom of the design. Everything seems to work together as one except the headline, but I think it just needs a little repositioning/sizing, etc. and it'll be great! Cool work!
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