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Need your comments about this logo

Hello designers,Hope all of you are well & happy today i made a concept for a friend for his business.....
alfonso designer spain

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#1 like an angel

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Posted 04 August 2012 - 01:03 AM

Hello designers,

Hope all of you are well & happy :)
today i made a concept for a friend for his business.. and i need to know your opinion and criticism about it and how to improve it if needed!!
Attached File  WATCH-LOGO.jpg   50.66KB   442 downloads

It's called H Watches
and the watch icon is supposed to form the shape of the (H) letter.

Looking forward for your comments

Regards,

Selma

♥ Selma ♥
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#2 pureart

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Posted 05 August 2012 - 08:11 AM

Nice concept.
I think you can do away with the grey rectangles. It will give more clarity to logo. The two parallel blue lines and the arms of clock are sufficient to convey the clock form. Also I think the H in text should be same blue as the icon you created. and the text 'watches' can be grey.
Hope you like the suggestions.
regards

#3 like an angel

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Posted 05 August 2012 - 02:31 PM

Nice concept.
I think you can do away with the grey rectangles. It will give more clarity to logo. The two parallel blue lines and the arms of clock are sufficient to convey the clock form. Also I think the H in text should be same blue as the icon you created. and the text 'watches' can be grey.
Hope you like the suggestions.
regards


Thanks pureart.. i'm working on the concept.. just need to find away to make the (H) more obvious..
really appreciated your feedback

♥ Selma ♥
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#4 Eraser

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Posted 06 August 2012 - 06:07 AM

Hello,

Well designed. it's so formal, my suggestion is to design it for kids.

#5 pureart

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Posted 06 August 2012 - 10:34 AM

:) I m sure you will eliminate all extra things till it becomes perfect.

#6 Bailey

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Posted 07 August 2012 - 01:51 AM

I love the simplicity of this design, and I really like where this is going. However I think the H inside the watch needs to be slightly more obvious. For some reason the rounded edges of the H in the watch bother me in contrast to the straight H of the type....but that might be completely a personal bias!

#7 antoneofull

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Posted 21 August 2012 - 05:12 AM

Greetings like an angel, I think what you do is a square watch, perhaps a Swiss watch that inspire strength, ahicon rectangular shaped watch that you can play with the letter H and put it in an ingenious way, I think then you can achieve great logo, hope help you, a hug for you and for all.

#8 MARKitTHINK

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Posted 26 August 2012 - 04:18 PM

You might want to explore putting the name to the side and playing for a more formal font.. perhaps a Lucida bright or make it a bit edgy using etnocentric font style.. You can go away with the base lines just add the small hands of the clock (the one that moves in seconds)... rest s good.. am just suggesting some alternatives you might want to try out...and maybe perhaps you can improve the H Watch... You had given more emphasis on the Watch more than the HWatch name.. well in my view,, that's how it is.. Hope my comment helped.. : ) Nice work!

#9 jecrt

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Posted 18 September 2012 - 05:20 PM

Is the business production of watches or selling watches? If he's actually producing the watch, I'd say ditch the watch in the logo because it becomes redundant.

#10 ymuas87

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 03:04 AM

- try a version with the H (watch) on the left side of the text "watches" (eliminating that single H letter)
- try a version with the rounded corners of the watch design straight edge to imitate the H letter
- try a version with all caps "H WATCHES"
- try a version with all one color (a white on black, a black/navy blue on white)

#11 CBIL360

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 11:07 AM

Looking Very Good,
Just a suggestion you can replace H with watch at the top.

#12 speedyboy3

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Posted 11 October 2012 - 12:32 PM

good

#13 Diab

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Posted 23 October 2012 - 03:26 AM

You have a rectangular watch with a pretty rounded typeface. I just don't think that the typeface fits here. It gives off an almost playful feel, while the graphic of the watch is serious and elegant. I think you should do away with the rounded ends on the H that makes up the watch graphic, and also replace the typeface with something more straight and serious. Also, as someone else pointed out, the two H's should be the same color.

It is clever, using the H as the graphic of the watch. However I think it needs a more solid direction.

#14 dlbonanno64

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Posted 06 January 2013 - 03:59 AM

Very sharp.

#15 HiDesign

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Posted 29 September 2013 - 01:45 AM

Nice concept.
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